About me
Hi my name is Josh and I have a brother called Troy, a Mum called Kim, a Dad called Tony ,Grandma called Mary, a Granddad called rob and I love them all. I have an xbox360, a PS2, my dad has a PS3 and my mum has a wii they are all very fun and I am very lucky to have the games that I have. I have a lot of friends. Some of these friends are are Jack, Liam, Luke, Alicia, Kyle and Blake. I play soccer for Fencibles my team is called Phoenix we're the second best team in the 12th grade so we are really good. I am 12 years old in October the 17th and my brother is 9 in August the 9th so I am the oldest of the kids that live in my house.I have a dog called Ty he's a boy he gets over excited when someone comes over and a cat called tiger thats a girl she dose not like kids.
Cool josh! You have a lot of PS thingys. How many was it? Ohhh right 4!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteKim
nice, josh, except that when you said that you were the second best team for soccer you said 'were' not 'we're'.
ReplyDeleteTabby
seems like you got correct by tabby! then who doesn't.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you talked about your gaming consoles but i reckon you should put some more information in there.
MIchael
Lots of facts about you and your family. Awesome but maybe you could put a little more info in there instead of just talking about your consoles. For instants if you have any pets... or your favourite colour and that sort of stuff. But it is a cool story about you.
ReplyDeleteConnor